The rain was pouring as Grayson ran out of the forest and back down the street into a small town. He bolted into the pharmacy and searches the towering shelves for the antidote, but it seemed that they were out. When all hope seemed lost, Grayson found the last bottle and ran to the counter, but there was no one there. Grayson began to run to walk towards the automatic doors, when a flash of light, then, darkness. The power was out and the doors stayed fastened shut. Grayson charged at the door and rammed it with all of his strength, but it was no use…
Hello Gabriel,
Your story could be the beginning of a complex mystery involving possible spies, thieves, crimes or a number of other things. We are left wondering how and why Grayson was poisoned and what might happen next. Well done.
With your growing skills as a writer, I hope you keep writing and sharing.
Ross Mannell (Team 100WC)
Teacher (retired), N.S.W., Australia