Zac was attempting to go to sleep with no success, when he heard the rumble of an old truck he quickly ran to the other side of his cell as the large vehicle came crashing through the wall of his cell. The driver jumped out of the truck and asked if the boy was okay. As he walked back to the truck though, a large hand grabbed the screaming man until he screamed no more. Zac ran and jumped into the truck and hit the accelerator. As he sped of the Zerasa shouted “next time we will kill you”.
Hello Gabriel,
Wow! What an experience in the Doom storyline we often find leads to action and adventure with a great deal of danger. It’s a good technique to build tension if you want readers to return to a continuing story. We wonder if Zac will survive this adventure. Well done.
Ross Mannell (Team 100WC)
Teacher (retired), N.S.W., Australia